Not bad, but the nudity is no good and that guy put too much reverb on his voice.
You also think next time you talk, you make talk that is constructive and not just critical. But constructive. Okay?!
... the nudity is no good ...
WAT?!
... that guy put too much reverb on his voice.
You do better next time. You make wonderbar story without reverb! Okay?!
Just my critique. Nudity is not acceptable. How are children supposed to watch this with that filth?
If you are worried about a four-year-old child today seeing nudity in Western Culture, I've got unfortunate information to tell you unless you are Amish.
E: And my nudity was nigger-lishish. Look at those Nat Geo titties!
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