came up with it. I have never tried it before so I sat and looked at my farm fields and it made me think about things; what is coming, what is gone, the crops, the thoughts. Then I wrote this briefly in about 5 minutes after thinking so it's not a great piece of work.
It's
A-BB-575-CC-A
So he put a haiku in the middle. Syllable wise I just wrote everything else spontaneously in rhyme. The haiku reminds me of an off kilter middle 8 in a composition of music but in poetry. I like his idea.
/u/Smedleys_Butler-1 came up with it. I have never tried it before so I sat and looked at my farm fields and it made me think about things; what is coming, what is gone, the crops, the thoughts. Then I wrote this briefly in about 5 minutes after thinking so it's not a great piece of work.
It's
A-BB-575-CC-A
So he put a haiku in the middle. Syllable wise I just wrote everything else spontaneously in rhyme. The haiku reminds me of an off kilter middle 8 in a composition of music but in poetry. I like his idea.
You done great my boy! Granted, I've established this form for Snapchat whores, like a degenerate sonnet, but you've excelled the mire!
You done great my boy! Granted, I've established this form for Snapchat whores, like a degenerate sonnet, but you've excelled the mire!
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