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There is No Flame, There is nobody to Admire,

There is no reason to Sweat, Fuck it all, I will not perspire,

Given no Good Reason, I feel this Focal Season, And Sense a Global Treason,

Two, And two, And three, Again,

If you see it at all, Tell your fucking friends. Death be done, And death be did, And death happened to all them kids,

You, And You, And You, Alone, Are responsible, For what is,

You and you and you Alone, Are Responsible For The Kids

Down and Deep Dig Again Shovel And Trowel Till The END

There is No Flame, There is nobody to Admire, There is no reason to Sweat, Fuck it all, I will not perspire, Given no Good Reason, I feel this Focal Season, And Sense a Global Treason, Two, And two, And three, Again, If you see it at all, Tell your fucking friends. Death be done, And death be did, And death happened to all them kids, You, And You, And You, Alone, Are responsible, For what is, You and you and you Alone, Are Responsible For The Kids Down and Deep Dig Again Shovel And Trowel Till The END

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The only stanza that was out of place was the third.

Reminds me of https://pic8.co/sh/EGLhfJ.png

Or take the "when will you learn" segment, and change the words to:

"that your inaction has consequences."

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Yeah, that makes sense.

I like writing poetry, but I realize that I am not actually good at it.

I am much better at writing prose, but that takes a more significant attention span, something I do not have as a human being.

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I still remember the segment about that guy bob (fuck if I remember the name) taking a bath. It was so well done it was if you had sat down in a tub and just wrote what you saw.

What happened to that? Did you write it from reference or just make up the details and observations as you went?

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Are you talking about the Occupant?

I lost my current version of that manuscript by losing the computer I had it written on in a bar slightly before lockdown.

Maybe I should just try to rewrite it.