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The shape of the floorplan One turn right or wrong Depending where you're coming from Besides hopping off at the junction For a fix at the nurses station We're still riding the L

Some now take different needles Most trade strong drink for coffee All jonesin' for cigarettes Stuck en route on the L

Sunlight ripples on ceilings Peaceful train underwater Show any longshoremen He'd be sure that we'd drown Yet somehow always handed same Big Book That belonged to a Clifton Tremored scribbles on the L

Crusty's back to construction Big Mike's returning to the oil rig Replaced by touchy old hippie And Boston smoking crack in a tree Hope for closure to misunderstandings With the De Lacey's and my Lord And Burroughs Adding Machine Left when El presidente Corey leaves May he not nod off on the L

Scotty answers my call from the landline Closest these kids'll get to a payphone Last we talked at length Before a blind date But what fog made me forget He returned to Pa Same that made her disappear Though we no longer smoke L's

Have I come to regard the majority The same as the elites I despise Useful idiots to be disposed of Maybe I'm booked for the same cattle car Maybe we all ride on the L

The shape of the floorplan One turn right or wrong Depending where you're coming from Besides hopping off at the junction For a fix at the nurses station We're still riding the L Some now take different needles Most trade strong drink for coffee All jonesin' for cigarettes Stuck en route on the L Sunlight ripples on ceilings Peaceful train underwater Show any longshoremen He'd be sure that we'd drown Yet somehow always handed same Big Book That belonged to a Clifton Tremored scribbles on the L Crusty's back to construction Big Mike's returning to the oil rig Replaced by touchy old hippie And Boston smoking crack in a tree Hope for closure to misunderstandings With the De Lacey's and my Lord And Burroughs Adding Machine Left when El presidente Corey leaves May he not nod off on the L Scotty answers my call from the landline Closest these kids'll get to a payphone Last we talked at length Before a blind date But what fog made me forget He returned to Pa Same that made her disappear Though we no longer smoke L's Have I come to regard the majority The same as the elites I despise Useful idiots to be disposed of Maybe I'm booked for the same cattle car Maybe we all ride on the L

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I'm turning into a broken record. So I'm gonna stop commenting but damn Smedley, well done. You should think about turning these into a small poem booklet you handwrite and see how say 50 or so sell. Your style of semi vulgar and emotional poetry that doesn't follow that faggot shit known as "political correctness" would be Bukowski like and appeal to many.

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Hah, thanks for all comments man. Will have to check out more Henley, not quite familiar

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https://www.theguardian.com/world/2001/jun/11/mcveigh.usa1

This is probably his most famous poem.

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Heh. That one rings a bell