Did you make this? Some suggestions: make the man more masculine-looking: he seems kind of scrawny. Alternatively, replace him with another woman, (unless that actually is a woman... butch af). Perhaps rework the first paragraph to: “Research has shown that women who are virgins on their wedding night are significantly less likely to get divorced and are most likely to be happy in their marriage.” As it is now, it kind of reads that you’re less likely to both get divorced AND enjoy your marriage. That is to say, it reads like “you won’t get divorced, but you won’t be happy either.”