Writing a letter to POTUS, need proof readers

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Edit: Write into Tucker Carlson and to President Trump. If you live in Texas, write this into the Texas state legislature and Governor Abbate. The more people write in, the more they will go "we need to do something about this"

Edit 2: I made some changes, I needed to add a few details in paragraphs 2 & 3. Feel free to read and tell me your thoughts. Thanks everyone

Edit 3: Here's some info if you wish to write to the President: https://www.whitehouse.gov/get-involved/write-or-call/

Edit 4: I wrote in to Tucker Carlson. I just changed the last paragraph of the letter to be more appropriate for emailing to Tucker.

Edit 5: Please read the final draft of this letter. Thanks again everyone https://poal.co/s/Whatever/54257

Dear President Trump,

My name is <insert my real name here>, I am a resident of <insert where I live here>. The matter I'm writing to you about today does not directly concern me but is of one that should be brought to your attention.
There’s a six year old boy named James Younger who lives in Texas. James’s mother is currently forcing this boy to be a girl. James clearly prefers to be a boy. His mother is ready to have him injected with the chemicals to change him into a girl when he turns eight years old. The boy’s father, Jeff Younger, has been fighting to get full custody of James. James’s parents are divorced. Jeff’s also been fighting to prevent James from getting the chemicals injected into him as well. He’s all alone in the case going against the two biggest law firms in Texas. He lost his job since he had been accused by his ex-wife of child abuse for telling James he’s a boy.
The website setup to support the father’s case claims that the chemicals can “cause serious damage including sterility and bone density issues.” The court has prevented Jeff from telling James he’s a boy. Jeff also can’t discuss his religious views with James as well. Jeff also must refer to James as “Luna” in public, per a court order. Apparently in Texas, doctors can perform sex-change surgeries on kids as young as eight years old. And, the parent that doesn’t have primary custody can be forced by the courts to pay for such surgery. If they don’t, they can lose parental rights along with receiving jail time.
I feel the laws need to be changed to prevent this from happening to young children. Also, Texas Governor Gregg Abbott should be made aware of this as well.
I’ve attached in this letter the “Our Story” page from the website for Jeff’s case for you to read. I have also attached a copy and paste letter that Jeff’s website has provided for people to send to Texas state officials. This will allow you to directly read for yourself what is currently happening to James. I think this is sickening and should not be happening in our country. You can find out more at the website savejames.com

Sincerely, <insert my real name here>

I'm writing this letter to the President as I'm sickened that a mother in Texas is wanting to give her son a sex change when he turns eight years old even though he clearly doesn't need one. Go to savejames.com if you guys want more info. Edit: Write into Tucker Carlson and to President Trump. If you live in Texas, write this into the Texas state legislature and Governor Abbate. The more people write in, the more they will go "we need to do something about this" Edit 2: I made some changes, I needed to add a few details in paragraphs 2 & 3. Feel free to read and tell me your thoughts. Thanks everyone Edit 3: Here's some info if you wish to write to the President: https://www.whitehouse.gov/get-involved/write-or-call/ Edit 4: I wrote in to Tucker Carlson. I just changed the last paragraph of the letter to be more appropriate for emailing to Tucker. Edit 5: Please read the final draft of this letter. Thanks again everyone https://poal.co/s/Whatever/54257 Dear President Trump, * My name is <insert my real name here>, I am a resident of <insert where I live here>. The matter I'm writing to you about today does not directly concern me but is of one that should be brought to your attention. * There’s a six year old boy named James Younger who lives in Texas. James’s mother is currently forcing this boy to be a girl. James clearly prefers to be a boy. His mother is ready to have him injected with the chemicals to change him into a girl when he turns eight years old. The boy’s father, Jeff Younger, has been fighting to get full custody of James. James’s parents are divorced. Jeff’s also been fighting to prevent James from getting the chemicals injected into him as well. He’s all alone in the case going against the two biggest law firms in Texas. He lost his job since he had been accused by his ex-wife of child abuse for telling James he’s a boy. * The website setup to support the father’s case claims that the chemicals can “cause serious damage including sterility and bone density issues.” The court has prevented Jeff from telling James he’s a boy. Jeff also can’t discuss his religious views with James as well. Jeff also must refer to James as “Luna” in public, per a court order. Apparently in Texas, doctors can perform sex-change surgeries on kids as young as eight years old. And, the parent that doesn’t have primary custody can be forced by the courts to pay for such surgery. If they don’t, they can lose parental rights along with receiving jail time. * I feel the laws need to be changed to prevent this from happening to young children. Also, Texas Governor Gregg Abbott should be made aware of this as well. * I’ve attached in this letter the “Our Story” page from the website for Jeff’s case for you to read. I have also attached a copy and paste letter that Jeff’s website has provided for people to send to Texas state officials. This will allow you to directly read for yourself what is currently happening to James. I think this is sickening and should not be happening in our country. You can find out more at the website savejames.com Sincerely, <insert my real name here>

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