Meh, weak sauce. I would've gone for the 'fall through the stairwell doorway , just as the last person walks out of the elevator and collapse on the ground sweating profusely and out of breath' but that's just me ...
Meh, weak sauce. I would've gone for the 'fall through the stairwell doorway , just as the last person walks out of the elevator and collapse on the ground sweating profusely and out of breath' but that's just me ...
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