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Yes. Once I saw it was about Drake I quit reading
Yes. Once I saw it was about Drake I quit reading
Its readable. Just uninteresting. Drake is some singing nigger I think. Lost interest when they started to defend a nigger pedo.
Its readable. Just uninteresting. Drake is some singing nigger I think. Lost interest when they started to defend a nigger pedo.
Readable, well in the sense it is composed of words and the occassional sentence; looks like cut and paste gibberish from some podcaster chimp trying to sound intelligent
Readable, well in the sense it is composed of words and the occassional sentence; looks like cut and paste gibberish from some podcaster chimp trying to sound intelligent
I read it, it made me think of the dialog in that show "Gilmore girls". Then I got to the last line, "too solemn in HER critique". Just a girl blathering on about some shit. Can't wait for the part where she says men don't listen.
I read it, it made me think of the dialog in that show "Gilmore girls". Then I got to the last line, "too solemn in HER critique". Just a girl blathering on about some shit. Can't wait for the part where she says men don't listen.
Describe what you think this chick looks like before I show you her bio blurb
Describe what you think this chick looks like before I show you her bio blurb
I'm sure she's a classic beauty, a mix of Mary Tyler Moore, Raquel Welch, and Audrey Hepburn.
I'm sure she's a classic beauty, a mix of Mary Tyler Moore, Raquel Welch, and Audrey Hepburn.
The title of her first book was 'White Negroes' (newyorker.com)
[The title of her first book was 'White Negroes'](https://www.newyorker.com/contributors/lauren-michele-jackson)
Not quite unreadable, but badly written.
Not quite unreadable, but badly written.
It's only slightly more lucid than Commiela.
It's only slightly more lucid than Commiela.
Yes. Is it intended to be?
Yes. Is it intended to be?
It is from a recent New Yorker article.
I just think it is crazy, they used to be the literary magazine, but I honestly can't fucking make my way through this fucking unreadable word salad.
It is from a recent *New Yorker* article.
I just think it is crazy, they used to be **the** literary magazine, but I honestly can't fucking make my way through this fucking unreadable word salad.
Perfectly understandable grammatically, just that their point is shit.
Perfectly understandable grammatically, just that their point is shit.
Do not affect a breezy manner. The breezy style is often the work of an egocentric, the person who imagines that everything that pops into his head is of general interest and that uninhibited prose creates high spirits and carries the day.
-The Elements of Style, White & Strunk
>Do not affect a breezy manner. The breezy style is often the work of an egocentric, the person who imagines that everything that pops into his head is of general interest and that uninhibited prose creates high spirits and carries the day.
-The Elements of Style, White & Strunk