My poetry is better
Link to one.
theres a magical place on the edge of space where sun is the love and the moon starts the day where nobody can hurt you and you feel so safe where music flows through your mind from ths sky and it sings in the night time a new something different no no no now the day is going to start with the sun but no high noon the stars ar ethe brightest no sign of the wind this coffee kinally kicked in i dont know drinking and dancing and having fun when the evening falls at first not a lot of people watch the sunset but if you do its pretty odd it doesnt even hit the end of the earth when it gets llight where would you be imagine hanging out with your friends after work in the bright sunlight, and the only way to get away from the evening light is to go in the bar and drink when you walked out of the bar would it be 6 am it cant be you would have to go back to work is this the zombies to come when your supposed to go to sleep in the sunlight when your supposed to go back to work when you walk out of the bar your so drunk you remember the moon set better home to god the sun doesnt intensify the drunk or your gonna be sick in the sunlight tgo home pass out dont forget to eat, imagine going to bed when the sun is brightest moon light to sinlight dusk to dawn would i be you and you be me everything backwards do a day videoing yourself and watch it play in reverse when you wake up in the morning the moon is coming out and you get up and eat and you go to work at luchtime the moon is the highest and stars are all bright still got some moonight time after work before the sun comes i need to get some sleep tonight i been saying it all day
I was gonna talk shit, but I really like the ideas behind your writing.
That being said, your writing is pretty bad, so I guess I am still talking shit.
What got you into writing?
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