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She turned then, with a look that was as sure a lie detector as any.
'You've loved other women since me.'

'Yes.' I agreed 'But to compare them to you is to compare the beach to the ocean. The beach is but a beautiful fraction of the land while the ocean is vast; shaping entire coastlines. Loving you has shaped every subsequent love I've known.'

A rude gesture conveyed her faith in my statement.

She turned then, with a look that was as sure a lie detector as any. 'You've loved other women since me.' 'Yes.' I agreed 'But to compare them to you is to compare the beach to the ocean. The beach is but a beautiful fraction of the land while the ocean is vast; shaping entire coastlines. Loving you has shaped every subsequent love I've known.' A rude gesture conveyed her faith in my statement.

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I like it. You should write more now.

And we should collab.

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I've kept my teeth sharp on clever PHP, HTML, and JS as amateur as my poetry & prose. But I haven't written anything more than a response to you in more than nine years. I'll make no promise that I can craft.. Well anything that might work in a collaborative circumstance. That said, I'm not unwelcome to disusing ideas for stories and poems.

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Sounds good to me, glad you are down to write at any cost and give up your silly side hobbies of programming and making money.

The first writing prompt I will give you is easy.

You are driving along a dark West Virginia road when...

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Challenge accepted, working on it now. My post will be forthcoming. Tentative title: Virginia, Are You Sure?