Outstanding, Smedley. Your new neural pathways to freedom have been entrenched. Discipline, attitude and orientation will ensure they take root and bear fruit.
Thanks. Now I have to do something practical
Outstanding, Smedley. Your new neural pathways to freedom have been entrenched. Discipline, attitude and orientation will ensure they take root and bear fruit.
Thanks. Now I have to do something practical
Your poems remind me of a modern day Robert Frost or William Ernest Henley.
Great job. I'm glad you found clarity and words to eloquently document and describe this major moment in your life.
Great lyrics for a song there.
I'm not the word smith you are but a chorus could go something like:
All the things I've said and done, at least that I remember. The hardest thing I've said by far is I'd like to try them sober.
I am a retired songwriter. Guess I always liked non rhyming poetry for the most part to explore other things. Think about getting back into it a lot with my cousin. Did plenty of jamming when I was away working off the rust.
A new friend from rehab wants to start a project. He did cut off a debtors fingers once, but they're still friends (guess the guy is like the village idiot fuck up). He also has constructive hobbies, like fabricating his own parts for intricate to scale models, and seems like a good father.
I was just offering a little nudge. I'll leave it in your capable hands should you decide to proceed that way.
Best wishes and Merry Christmas.
Thanks man. I dig it. Merry Christmas to you too nigga
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