Housekeeping: 3:27 leukemia (sp) 6:19 explain (sp) 6:39 admittedly (sp) Maybe I missed the significance of the rainbow lion, but, at this point, anything with a rainbow has a negative connotation to me and creates a preconceived notion that doesn't motivate me to watch - but I did and am glad. I like your voice/intonation - controlled but passionate. I know your voice from somewhere but can't place it. Good speed (usually put vids at 1.5 speed bc they're frustratingly slow) Good length Thank you for not putting irritating music in the background. I actually like the white text on black. We are surrounded by so much external stimuli, that the absence of it makes the viewer completely focus on the content - which is excellent (the content and the focus.) To the point with relatable examples. I would have liked you to put the rape support hotline in text, too - People need to understand that, like Bundy, the ugly truth hides behind a pretty narrative. Appreciate that you include additional resources Consider getting an email not at google. Good for you for starting these! I'm not a video person, and you held my attention. I'd love to see you do something with this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6RuYaEeiCE8 It has a ton of good information concerning tech, transhumanism and learning - should be required listening for anyone who has/plans to have children. They're sneaking it up on us, and we need to be aware. I think you could do something very effective with it. Thank you, and I look forward to seeing more of your work.