You motherfucker. All you did with that was set the mood. Don't get me wrong, I think it's great. But if you're going to write a book, you have to have a story to tell. Give me an outline. Where/when does your story begin. I can picture a sullen man watching TV with a whiskey in his hand... But to tell a story, you have to have a beginning, a middle (great scene with the TV and that lady) and an end.
You motherfucker. All you did with that was set the mood.
Don't get me wrong, I think it's great.
But if you're going to write a book, you have to have a story to tell.
Give me an outline.
Where/when does your story begin.
I can picture a sullen man watching TV with a whiskey in his hand...
But to tell a story, you have to have a beginning, a middle (great scene with the TV and that lady) and an end.
And I fell asleep, but was not woke.
Dreaming of a Better Life? Don't sleep on this new series on Showtime! So I slept And when I dreamt it was of going into the woods at dusk, With Friends, on Horseback, And telling them not to go in, But they went in, and we kept going.
And I fell asleep, but was not woke.
>Dreaming of a Better Life? Don't sleep on this new series on Showtime!
So I slept
And when I dreamt it was of going into the woods at dusk,
With Friends, on Horseback,
And telling them not to go in,
But they went in,
and we kept going.
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