She needs to stop jumping around. Attention span of a housecat. She's all over the road. Tell a story for Christ's sake.
List the top 5 biggest revelations and make a succinct summary of the background of each in a planned way, not chronologically, but logically.
1) "Here are 5 big revelations" (the bullet points) 2) Go through each one-by-one and give a quick background. 3) Find a way to tie 2,3,4, and 5 into #1 so the overview hangs together for those paying attention.
Leave the "interesting" details to the books. These presentations should be a planned story that holds together and is backed up by the books.
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