If you're going to point out how unfunny women are in a joke, it better be a funny joke. The premise is flawed here. Why does it take a group of them to be unfunny. Is one alone funny? Why is there a group of them anyway? Little jagged edges take away from a smooth joke.
Maybe go the other way around. What do you call a group of female dogs? The View.
Needs work.
If you're going to point out how unfunny women are in a joke, it better be a funny joke. The premise is flawed here. Why does it take a group of them to be unfunny. Is one alone funny? Why is there a group of them anyway? Little jagged edges take away from a smooth joke.
Maybe go the other way around. What do you call a group of female dogs? The View.
Needs work.
Ok.. but if one woman is not funny then a group is even less funny. Any other suggestions or another way to improve it
Ok.. but if one woman is not funny then a group is even less funny. Any other suggestions or another way to improve it
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