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Right now my basic premise is this:

  • An empire that's slowly dying/declining
  • Enemy at the gates due to the
  • Enemy within

The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations.

Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders.

Just pour on the ideas, lads!

Right now my basic premise is this: * An empire that's slowly dying/declining * Enemy at the gates due to the * Enemy within The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations. Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders. Just pour on the ideas, lads!

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Since this is an awakening story I think the beginning should be written fully in the narrative of a liberal sheep. The way you adress issues should not elude to the fact that you doubt any leftist trope.

The protagonist should be an "ally". Fully supportive of leftist violence, censorship, and trans and LGB propaganda. To that effect I think he should be a high school student with a zipper tits and faggot friend. Zipper tits can confide in him all the hardships she is having with her choices, the way in which she feels she was manipulated etc. Only to have the protagonist "support" her decisions and gaslight her on why she feels mislead, blaming those feelings on society.

Later when zippertits kills herself the protagonist will have to struggle with the fact that he was partially responsible.

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The protagonist can start to boubt his convictions when reading the suicide note.

For example at some point zipper tits will complain that whenever she tries to voice her concerns or displeasure with surgeries or hormones she gets censored. She gets frustrated and starts talking about how much harm the censorship is doing to her.

The protagonist then stops her to say that the censorship is a good thing because her anti trans feelings will get used to hurt other trans fags. That she is only one person who would benefit from free speech in this instance while thousands of trans fags would get hurt. Etc.

Then in the suicide note zipper tits will say that she found a support group of other zipper tits who all had the same experience. That there are hundreds of them but they were all censored so it looked like there were almost none. She will explain how she could have made changes as soon as she had doubts which would have made her life better but she didn't know because everything was censored. Now it is too late and she only has one way out. If only protagonist hadn't gaslit her she would have found the group earlier and made those changes.