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Right now my basic premise is this:

  • An empire that's slowly dying/declining
  • Enemy at the gates due to the
  • Enemy within

The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations.

Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders.

Just pour on the ideas, lads!

Right now my basic premise is this: * An empire that's slowly dying/declining * Enemy at the gates due to the * Enemy within The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations. Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders. Just pour on the ideas, lads!

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Thought about writing it from the perspective of the jew? It would be too easy and tempting to make the bad guys one note villains because jews are literally mustache twirling villains, and also too tempting to write the protagonist as an idealised version of whites, which would basically be every superhero movie ever. Start off with the (((protagonist))) being told constantly that everyone hates him for no reason and all the 'unjust' punishment his family has suffered which spurs him to get even. Throughout he cheats and steals from everyone he can, especially good people which represents whites. One time he mistakenly steals from a (((family member))) and is severely punished all while parents turned a blind eye or shared in the theft of whites. Viewing whites from a secondary viewpoint could really highlight and define what it means to be white person. Heck give the jew a white friend at school who does things the right way and struggles with his chin up while the jews father shakes hands with the dean and he gets bumped up a class and the jew still complains anyway. Later he gets initiated into his families cult and meets powerful people behind closed doors and slowly finds out there were good reasons for all of the punishments his family faced while his white friend starts talking about the exact group he just joined and the fear he feels. The ending could be that his white childhood friend joins in a revolution to hunt his group down and he comes face to face or perhaps have the jew win and backstab his friend.

If it's allegorical you could swap jews for 'saturn' worshippers who are truly atheistic and devoid of spirit and instead worship their time on earth and avoid working for money the way whites do. Add a part where the white kid is working a job and the jew spends his time managing his money and skimming off the top, make it a running theme where the white kid does hard work and the jew takes his share in the reward.

I think it would make for a far more natural story that way and it would be far more insightful. The turner dairies was prescient but felt like a total power fantasy