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Right now my basic premise is this:

  • An empire that's slowly dying/declining
  • Enemy at the gates due to the
  • Enemy within

The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations.

Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders.

Just pour on the ideas, lads!

Right now my basic premise is this: * An empire that's slowly dying/declining * Enemy at the gates due to the * Enemy within The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations. Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders. Just pour on the ideas, lads!

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Let's use "A" and "Z" as name placeholders.

Life is rough. A and Z are barely surviving. Z figures that if they work with the system, and serve their overlords, they will profit. A is against it and wants to keep his morals. Something happens, like they report some scummy White trash arms smugglers or something. (Or they do it by accident.) But they begin to prosper because they work with the system. A is still reluctant, but Z keeps convincing him. Over time they both find that life is easier working with the system instead of against it. They get deeper and deeper into being good little Goys because life is better. Every decision and action seems like a good idea at the time.

But then Z loses everything due to things he did working for the overlords. His family is arrested due to his previous actions. - Something like, the arms smugglers he got arrested also smuggled fruit that his dad sold. So his dad gets arrested by the system for selling healthy fruit instead of insects. - Things like that The characters were doing good things when siding with the system. But those good things can be spun into bad things. - Like banning hate speech seems like a good idea until criticising the government is called hate speech. Or unintended consequences - like making everyone wear a mask so people don't spit on others when they talk and spread fewer viruses. But then people continually wipe their virus covered hands all over their masks making them more likely to catch viruses. The point is that the characters did things that seem like the right thing to do at the time. They thought they were the good guys by siding with the system. But it turns out they weren't.

Z loses everything while nothing bad happens to A and he thrives. Z after losing everything to the system, Z goes full on against the system, while A justifies taking the easy route and all its benefits. - (The opposite of the way they were in the beginning.) A saying that Z was originally right to side with the system, just look at how good A's life is right now. With Z telling him that he was wrong and to look at Z's life right now. Z tells A that he'll eventually lose everything like he did.

So Z lost everything. A's life is great. Maybe A is recorded arguing with Z by a surveillance drone. Maybe a regular person records him. But in any case, some powerful people see A being not just a good Goy, but the best Goy.

A is recruited into an elite group of Goyim. People who the overlords control and hide behind. A learns all the tricks they use to keep the people weak, confused, and complacent. How they prevent any uprisings. How they retain control.

Maybe A thinks it's horrible immediately or over time, but A tries to do everything he can to take down the system. A working from the inside and Z working from the outside. All of the manipulation and control, they figure out how it's achieved and is described in detail (describing exactly how they do it to us right now), and they figure out ways to take it all down by learning how it works from the inside out. And that's the rest of the story. Describing how everything is controlled, the power and reach they have. And our characters taking the entire system down in much the same way that we need to in real life.