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Right now my basic premise is this:

  • An empire that's slowly dying/declining
  • Enemy at the gates due to the
  • Enemy within

The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations.

Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders.

Just pour on the ideas, lads!

Right now my basic premise is this: * An empire that's slowly dying/declining * Enemy at the gates due to the * Enemy within The enemy within will of course be a stand-in for jews, I'm thinking I will incorporate some of the history of the Khazars into this, a nation of people heavily degenerated who were abducting and sacrificing the children of their neighboring kingdoms to their dark god. The evil Khazar nation was largely broken up a couple of hundred years before and their people fled/infiltrated into the White nations. Protagonist will be a young man who always felt something was "off" about the common world view of those around him and the direction of his kingdom. Inciting incident will likely be something to do with discovering a ritual child sacrifice by jews who hold positions of power in his kingdom. He'll undergo essentially what we'd consider a redpilling about the jews in the story, and gather allies and power to him to attempt to save his nation from the scourge of the child sacrificing jews that are flooding his nation with invaders. Just pour on the ideas, lads!

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Sounds cool. Maybe you can give it a working title and keep us updated with regular posts under that title.

I'll try to come up with something, but to keep the ideas on track you will need to have a general story arch (preferably multiple story archs that interact), characters with personalities and speach patterns, time and place details so the story suggestions make sense in context.

With a working title everyone can make their suggestions in new posts, which will allow upvoting good ideas and discussions on each individually.

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Maybe you could somehow work in the protagonist finds some recordings made by his Grandfather or Great Grandfather who served in the U S army , landed in Normandy and fought his way into Germany

In his old age Grandpa realizes we were all lied to , that ze evil Nazis were in fact the good guys .

Maybe give some examples of why he comes to this realization, with vivid recollections about battle thrown in too.