Hello Poal
I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better.
The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet.
The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore.
I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated.
Thanks in advance.
Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea
https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt
Hello Poal
I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better.
The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet.
The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore.
I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated.
Thanks in advance.
Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea
https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt
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