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I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better.

The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet.

The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore.

I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea

https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

Hello Poal I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better. The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet. The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore. I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated. Thanks in advance. Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

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I will take a look

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Thanks a bunch

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That didnt seem too long at all to me. And I agree with your points. I do not consent to tyranny either. You could shorten it up some I am sure. Some of it was repeating the same premise in different words.

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It is definitely in need of editing.

The big finish is missing. What does someone who no longer consents to being governed actually do?

There is no wilderness to conquer, there is no free land available for a new country.

We are slaves from birth to death now, and just accept that?

The entire election farce has shown that nothing the people do matters anymore, and we are ruled by the elites, and what does that mean?

All good questions, not really looking to you personally for an answer, but questions that everyone should ask themselves.

Having a strong solid response for everyone would go a long way though.