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I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better.

The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet.

The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore.

I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea

https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

Hello Poal I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better. The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet. The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore. I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated. Thanks in advance. Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

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Dm me. My time is fairly limited but I want to help with this.