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I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better.

The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet.

The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore.

I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea

https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

Hello Poal I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better. The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet. The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore. I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated. Thanks in advance. Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

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Why the hell wouldn't you include what you had in this post?

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I don't know how much text I can place in a post, and didn't want to jump too fast without gauging the reaction.

The first responder was all "nobody is going to read 15 pages" LOL

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15 pages is kind of a lot

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Technically it will 8 pages - at most, but because of the folding to make it a neater package, that makes it 15ish "half pages"

but give the first part a read, and see if it is too much.

There is a lot that the government has done, that merits a longer reply.

The ending is still unfinished, and I'm hoping to make it a "What you can do now" type call for action.