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Hello Poal

I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better.

The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet.

The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore.

I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea

https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

Hello Poal I posted yesterday about writing a pamphlet called "I Do Not Consent", using John Locke's philosophy of "consent of the governed", and I have written a good portion of it, and want to get some feedback and criticism and also any suggestions for how to make it better. The idea is to have it be about 8 sides of a Letter sided page, foldable into a 15ish page little pamphlet. The content is based on how the government has abandoned everyone, and how to proceed if and when a person does not consent to be part of that farce anymore. I'm looking for a good place to post to get a lot of eyes for feedback and criticism, but even more importantly, anyone with suggestions and additions/edits would be most appreciated. Thanks in advance. Edit: here is a link to the first draft/idea https://files.catbox.moe/egbfst.txt

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Why the hell wouldn't you include what you had in this post?

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I don't know how much text I can place in a post, and didn't want to jump too fast without gauging the reaction.

The first responder was all "nobody is going to read 15 pages" LOL

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15 pages is kind of a lot

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Technically it will 8 pages - at most, but because of the folding to make it a neater package, that makes it 15ish "half pages"

but give the first part a read, and see if it is too much.

There is a lot that the government has done, that merits a longer reply.

The ending is still unfinished, and I'm hoping to make it a "What you can do now" type call for action.

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Figure out how to boil the whole thing down to a few simple statements and dress it up with some eye catching graphics such that the whole thing fits on one page. Nobody is going to read a 15 page pamphlet.

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The lack of attention span is one of the hallmarks of a failing civilization.

Everyone wants their beliefs to fit in a 20 second sound bite.

Fuck that.

If 100 million people can read 3 books of 50 shades of gray, they can stop for ten minutes and read about how the government fucks them.

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Ok then good luck with that I guess

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I will take a look

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Thanks a bunch

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That didnt seem too long at all to me. And I agree with your points. I do not consent to tyranny either. You could shorten it up some I am sure. Some of it was repeating the same premise in different words.

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It is definitely in need of editing.

The big finish is missing. What does someone who no longer consents to being governed actually do?

There is no wilderness to conquer, there is no free land available for a new country.

We are slaves from birth to death now, and just accept that?

The entire election farce has shown that nothing the people do matters anymore, and we are ruled by the elites, and what does that mean?

All good questions, not really looking to you personally for an answer, but questions that everyone should ask themselves.

Having a strong solid response for everyone would go a long way though.

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Pass out copies at your next antifa meeting and see what your comrades have to say about it.

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Simply copy this word for word, and print it on a small card to carry with you. Refer to it when asked to submit to being forcefully vaccinated.

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yeah also don't forget your lmao

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Did you read the post?

"Consent of the governed"

Not consent to for sex.

I guess it is the same thing when dealing with pedo joe.

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Dm me. My time is fairly limited but I want to help with this.